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Post by Kiba on Jun 19, 2007 7:59:33 GMT -6
Sry my compter's running slow. I will post our story possibly later today. My house is getting redone... *dies of bordom* Anyway sry bout the wait Gaara.
ps: Do u think I will get caught if I touch their power too- *staples self in the face* ...yeah just forget that idea...
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Post by Kiba on Jun 19, 2007 8:03:53 GMT -6
nvm i have nothing better 2 do so i guess i'll post it now... ____________________________________________________
Snow covered the silent forest, sparkling in the pale moonlight. Suddenly a boy darted into the open, in his arms ha held a girl about 2 years younger than him. He ran as though his life depended on it, leaving a trail of footprints and blood. The boy ran when suddenly he ran into a man. "Who are you?" asked the man. "My name is Coryn... but that doesn't matter... please take her... take Sacora... her life's in danger... please take her to Konoha!" The man blinked. "What about you?" "I need to set a distraction." said Coryn darting off through the forest. Coryn ran through the forest until suddenly a man appeared in front of him. "Where is she?!" "Lost her," said Coryn. The man took his arms amd jerked them back roughly, there was a crack and a pop and a cry of pain. Coryn fell and the man kicked him in the gut "You'll pay and we will find her!" said the man. Then he picked up Coryn and vanished. At the other edge of the forest Kakashi stood there holding a young girl in his arms. She blinked her eyes open and he blinked in shock. "Who are you... where am I? Who am I?" asked the girl. "Well Sacora, you're right outside the Hidden Leaf Village." said Kakashi, staring down at the girl, her bright Sharingan eyes glowing with confusion.
* * * ____________________________________________________ Okay the parts in purple were written by Gaara and the parts in red were written by me Kiba.
Sry bout the shortness! Guess I'm just lazy. I'll post the rest later... Kiba out!!!
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Post by ~Xx:Tainted:xX~ on Jun 24, 2007 20:41:52 GMT -6
Kakashi-sama...I'm off to meet Naruto-sensei!" called Sacora before darting out of the house. She walked to the clearing the 3 stumps and jumped on top the middle one. She sat there cross-legged waiting. While she waited she practiced her Sharingan. Kakashi had told her that her Sharingan was extremely advanced, stronger than his. One time on her first day as a Genin she had looked inside of her sensei, at her memories, but was filled with a terrible pain and backed out instantly to find him staring at her. She sighed and deactivated her Sharingan as a boy came up to her, on his shoulder was a small black puppy, this was Kiba's son and the only person besides Kakashi and Naruto-sensei who knew about her Sharingan. "Hello Neko. Have you seen Naruto-sensei anywhere?" she asked him looking a bit owrried. "Sacora....there's been an incident involving Naruto," said Neko slowly. Sacora's eyes got wide in shock. "What do you mean?! What happened?!" she was panic-stricken. Nothing like this had ever happened well at least since she had arrived. "The Akatsuki attacked the village again. Most likely after Naruto, but we're not for sure." "Akatsuki?" she questioned, still panicing slightly. Neko didn't answer. "Meko who or what is this Akatsuki thing that's after Naruto-sensei?"
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Post by Kiba on Jun 25, 2007 15:31:09 GMT -6
Sry u had 2 post the next part gaara. guess i just got lazy... ____________________________________________________ "Sacora, listen to me," Kiji, his dog, barked slightly. "We're not sure if this is right or not, but we think that Naruto- sensei has been captured by the Akatsuki." "But why?! Why would they want Naruto- sensei?!" Just then 4 kunai flew out of the trees. Neko disappeared in a puff of smoke and Sacora, startled by the sudden attack, felloff the back of the tree stump. Neko reappeared next to her. "What was that?" she asked immediatly. He was looking at the trees. "I'm not sure, but whatever it was, it's gone now." 'Could that be the Akatsuki? No, they disappeared after they kidnapped Naruto- sensei.' Thoughts continued to fill his mind. 'What in the world is going on?' They got up and headed back to the leaf village with a pair of eyes watching them. "Why didn't we attack?" one said. "Not while the're so close to Konoha, hm. They could send for reinforcements and overpower us. Isn't that right Coryn, hm?" He was nagging on him big time and had a huge grin on his face, showing partially through the hair covering the side of his face. Coryn remained emotionless. "Yeah, whatever."
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Naruto, being the 6th Hokage of the Hidden Leaf Village, started up a comotion when he just suddenly disappeared wuth the Akatsuki.Everyone was confused and a bit frightened. Nobody had any idea what to do or who to trust. "What will they do to Naruto- sensei?" Sacora asked Kakashi 3 days after he disappeared. "I'm not really sure," replied Kakashi. "Teach me the Chidori." Kakashi looked at her for a minute then nodded. He took her into the forest and said, "Try gathering chakra in your hand." She did as he said, but nothing happened. "Watch." he said, then showed her the move. Her Sharingan activated and she watched him blow through a wall of rock. Then she tried gathering chakra again, this time there was a spark and a crackling blue lighting was in her hand. A tingle of joy made its way through her body. The lighting died and so did the feeling. She looked up to see Kakashi staring at her. "thatwas quick." he said. Sacora smiled. "It was easy after I watched you." "Let's see if you can learn something without copying it." said Kakashi. Sacora smiled. "I'll try."
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Neko sighed. "Would you quit dragging me up here! Your technique is fine!" "It needs to be more than fine!" said Sacora. Neko sighed again. "You beat me everytime!" "Yeah but I didn't copy these!" said Sacora. "Then where did you learn them?" "I made them up!" ____________________________________________________if im not 2 tired i will post the rest of the story tomorrow or maybe later tonight... Kiba out!!!
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Post by Kiba on Jun 25, 2007 15:42:17 GMT -6
Oh snap!!!!!!! LIGHTBULB MOMENT!!!!!!! I forgot about Kakashi's hunch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *starts cusing out story* SNAP!!!!!! ANOTHER LIGHTBULB MOMENT!!!!!!!!!! If I'm Kiba then that means that...that...NO!!! Neko: *sobs* My dads a girl... Well look on the brightside. At leasy I'm good-looking." Everyone: ................................................... *denial* *dies*
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Post by ~Xx:Tainted:xX~ on Jun 26, 2007 7:23:03 GMT -6
lol oh and no prob...I have most of it written down and i was bored so...
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Post by Kiba on Jun 26, 2007 14:31:06 GMT -6
They trained for hours, sending flashes of light through the forest. Suddenly it started raining and the rain soon turned into a storm. Everytime lightning flashed she was filled with that same feeling of pure joy. Neko looked at her. "Why are you so happy all the sudden?" "Lightning," she said simply. "What about it?" "I'm not really sure." "Let's go..." said Neko. "Look out!" said Sacora pushing him. The instant she did a bunch of shuriken flew at the space he had just been standing. Kiji growled and jumped toward the bushes. Neko motioned to Kiji who scampered over to him. Sacora pulled him up and looked over to the bushes. She stood up and walked towards the bushes. Whoever had thrown the shuriken had fled. She was about to return to Neko when something caught her eye. It was a necklace with a beautiful jewel on the end. The jewel swirled with all the colors of a storm and had been carved into the shape of a lightning bolt. Sacora picked it up and suddenly felt comforted. It was hers and she knew it. She put it around her neck and the minute she did it started to glow. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ sry its so short...*coughprocratsanatorahem*
Shikamaru: ...And to think they call me lazy...
*death aura* ...TEMARI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shikamaru: *runs away*
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Post by Kiba on Jul 4, 2007 8:23:51 GMT -6
I have to do a lot of decorating and running 2 the store so I will post our story tomorrow. i want to finish my 4th of July story today so i'll have to do that while everyone is watching the "amazing" fireworks show...Kiba out!!!
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Post by Kiba on Jul 8, 2007 17:17:34 GMT -6
I am going 2 try 2 post all of our story either some time today or tomorrow... Kiba out!!!!
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Post by Kiba on Jul 11, 2007 19:32:41 GMT -6
The gray storm clouds turned to hues of blue and the glowing stopped. She smiled and returned to Neko. "Look what I found." "What are you doing... it might be dangerous!" said Neko. Sacora took it off and handed it to him and it instantly turned back to gray. Kiji sniffed it and barked then Neko gave it back to her and it changed back to blue. "Happy?" she asked. "Kiji thinks it's fine!" "Kiji's still a puppy." said Neko. Kiji barked at him.____________________________________________________ I will post more but we have 2 move the computer back... I am going 2 try and post all of our story today... Kiba out!!!!
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Post by Kiba on Jul 11, 2007 21:59:37 GMT -6
"Why would anyone want to kill me?" "Well we don't know anything about your past," he said quietly. Sacora shot him a look, then closed her eyes. "I am not important enough... I am not worth killing." "You're the only person who has a..." "Itachi... and Kakashi- sama!" "Yours is stronger!" "So!" "You're 13! You can look inside other's memories!" "Yet I can't look at my own." said Sacora sadly. Neko sighed and placed his hand on her shoulder. "Let's go home... before something else happens." Kiji licked her hand and she smiled and nodded. Then she met Neko's gaze and they walked home. * * *
"What were you thinking?!" The man slammed him against the wall. "I...I..." said Coryn. "You could have ruined everything!" "I'm sorry it's just..." said Coryn. "I thought we got rid of your old habits! You were a different person than you are now!" The man let Coryn off the wall then punched him in the face. Coryn glared at him and nodded. "Let's just hurry up with this." The man sighed. "Then let's go!" Coryn looked to the ground and then walked after the man.
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Sacora stared up at the stars, Neko and Kiji beside her. She walked towards the grave and set down a flower. A year ago, Namiko, their teamate and Sacora's best friend, was killed. Sacora had loved him like a brother and was devistated when she had found the body. Nobody had ever figured out what had happened. She bent down and ran her fingers across his name, and a single tear fell from her face. "Aw how sweet, you really did care about him... oh how much fun it was to kill him!" said a voice. Neko and Sacora spun around to find a man watching them. "Now if I remember correctly you two had a fight." said the man. "Shut up!" "Deidara... you're Deidara... one of the Akatsuki... aren't you?" "Poor Sacora, always alone and helpless. Can't remember anything! All you can do is sit there and play with your copy- cat tricks!" said Deidara. There was a flash of lightning and Deidara smiled. "That's it..." Sacora charged at him, Chidori blazing and tried to make contact but she never did. Deidara dodged and grabbed her wrist. Suddenly a bunch of shuriken flew at Deidara. Deidara jumped out of the way. Sacora turned to see a boy standing in a tree, he jumped down his eyes on Deidara. "Coryn!" said Deidara. "Stay out of this, it's not your problem!" "Go away!" said Coryn simply. Deidara looked at him, then Sacora, Then at Neko. '3-on-1...' he thought. Then he glared at Coryn before vanishing. Sacora sighed and turned to Coryn. "Thank you." 'Don't thank me yet...' thought Coryn. Then he said out loud, "They have Naruto! And they're about to..." Sacora interrupted. "Do you know wher they are?" Coryn nodded. "I just escaped myself!" "Take me there!" "No! I don't trust him!" said Neko. "Well I do... let's go... um it's Coryn right>" Coryn nodded. "Then I'm coming too!" said Neko Kiji barked in agreement. "Fine." said Sacora A dark look flashed upon Coryn's face and he nodded. ____________________________________________________ Im tired so I'm gonna go 2 bed but I promise I will type the rest tomorrow! I'm on a role... Kiba out!!!!
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Post by Kiba on Jul 12, 2007 15:18:33 GMT -6
Coryn led them into the forest, deep into the forest, so deep that no sunlight touched the ground. Suddenly he stopped and then took a step forward. The forest rippled and he vanished. "A portal?" asked Neko, but Sacora had also stepped through. He sighed and took a step forward, but nothing happened. He froze in shock as a thought hit him. 'Was it a trap?' * * * ____________________________________________________ sry but I'm having some issues with my brother I will post it later! ... Kiba out!!!!
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Post by Kiba on Jul 18, 2007 14:28:42 GMT -6
Hey did u notice that most of the story so far was written by u Gaara?
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Post by Kiba on Aug 2, 2007 23:34:40 GMT -6
sry!!!!! I will post more of our story!!! I promise!!!!!!
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Post by Kiba on Sept 6, 2007 5:03:12 GMT -6
POST OUR STORY!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T BECAUSE U HAVE IT!!!!
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